Walking on the silent corridor,
Empty with doors shut closed,
Once a path of congested activities,
Turn downright hollow,
Like how my heart is for you.
The eerie sight of the silent corridor,
Buck every muscle I had in me,
For me to walk faster, Think smarter,
Towards where I don’t want to be,
The fiery hell of sorrow.
On the path of this silent corridor,
I see not friends but foe,
Taking every sweet, To beat me down,
Leaving me lying in warmth of my own blood,
Kissing the cold floor of my sanity.
Lighting the path of this silent corridor,
I see my heart on the right,
And my obligation on the left,
For I know which side I should be,
But no I still walk forward, foolishly balanced.
The end of this silent corridor,
Is just…
2.33pm, 11/4/11.
Do prevail.
So i m going to comment it, with the same moodiness, the same coldness, and the same sadness of wat u experienced. Before tat, THANKS for making a good piece tat can actually venting out all the bitterness and the loneliness tat you are facing!!! The best picture of the corridor, and u fantasticified it with ur loneliness!!!! I respects and salutes for it harddd!!!! I got to capture the loneliness, terrible, and the endless dark u r facing, just like the GET SUCKS endless corridor, where nobody is thr for u just for a little single warmth. IT FELT HARD AND DEEP!!! and no doubt, u seems to enjoy the wounds, the bleed!!! Shld i defined it as ENJOYMENT? but yess, i felt tat, coz u rather kissed on ur wounds hard, rather to keep brace thru the endless corridor by urself!!!!! U JUZ NEED SOMEONE TO BE BY URSIDE, by there's no one doing so. Sry if my comment on this reminds u about wat u r facing, but tat's the way I felt it. GOOD PIECE!!!!! It makes me too overwhelmed in it, though I fell even deeper, but just LOVE the way u pictured them out in the cold and dark corridor!!!!! THUMBS UP AGAIN FOR THE GOOD PIECE!!!!!!!!!!! APPRECIATE IT !!!!!!
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