Friday, 18 March 2011

Morning drive

As I drive by,
Along a small road,
The drum thumps,
Followed by soft kissing piano,
Then the guitar sings,
Serenaded by a touch of vocal,
Like a perfect blend coffee sip up slow,
Warm, addictive, soulful.

 As I vowed,
To just listen,
To let my shy heart blooms open,
Taking in the early sun,
To lighten my fiery day,
Giving way to the morning breeze,
To take sorrowful dust away.

As the road still go,
Colours,
At its most colourful,
The soothing green, the gentle red,
The calm blue, the smiling grey,
Hugging me at this vastness,
So protected,
Yet so free.

As I go over,
Over charted humps,
Predicted obstacles, slowing me,
Giving me time to see,
Observe the road I am taking,
I would go ups and downs,
Yet I drove on,
On the road of my choice.

As I breathe,
Breathing in the scent of morning,
So lush with nature,
So eager to live,
As I reaches the end of the road, unnoticingly,
I am deemed to choose,
To the left, to the right, to the front,
Not forgetting to the back.
Path chosen, are in no matters,
As long the destination are known,
Origins are remembered.

1 comment:

  1. well, it is undoubtedly another good piece from u!!! I can see all the beautiful scenery, just like I m sitting in the car, winded down the window, and let the breeze sweeps gently on muy face, listening to the musics played in the car, drive so slow, and enjoyed everything tat goes by. I smelt the scents from flowers, I saw the different raging colours, together made the roadside so beautiful. Wat I love the poem is, I am having a big surprise when I read till the middle verse!!! I as the reader, will judge the poem as the portray for describing the beauty and the scene of the morning roadside, but, it actually defines choice of life when i get to the middle verses!!!! wat a good work is done!!! So I am sharing wat I seen thru tis. U as the driver, controlling ur own path to be taken, and u enjoyed much from different things tat happened, on the road, or in ur life, when it cums to choices, to the left, to the right, to the front, or backward, still, u r following ur heart, wish to make the best choice. The origin, can I define it as HEART? so wat may cums out from the heart, is where the destiny lies. So u appreciate wat has happened, and wat is going to happen. IT'S A NICE EFFORT, thumbs up again for the gud work, BUCK UP!!!! keep ON!!!!!!! Hope to see more from u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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